Trying to find the words

How do you word something you don't fully understand yourself?

This is what I have so far:

"My intention has always been to create pieces that encourage people to take the time out of their busy day-to-day lives. To appreciate life’s simplicities and the world around them, to stop, take a second look and admire something.

The realisation that I myself was not doing what my work encouraged others to do, was one that broke me out of a pretty big rough patch.

Inspired by found objects from interactions with my environment, this body of works represents a reminder to slow down, go for a walk, and take a deep breath."

I think it's alright, but I'll sleep on it. Suss it out tomorrow morning when I have a fresh mind!